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Great work at conveying the scene. I have to say the elements you introduce bring out a great sense of action and underlying mindset to the character's development.

Fantastic story development. I look forward to seeing more development of this world into the future.
Wow, he's got that look... Very rich look! In his eyes, if you can see the history of the whole scene. You convey the atmosphere perfectly. ^w^
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